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modestman ([personal profile] modestman) wrote in [community profile] weathertop 2013-04-12 08:42 pm (UTC)

"No, no, nothing like that. It's uh."

How can he put this in a way that's not going to sound as though he wants to bring her over simply to try and pry information out of her? Because there's more to it than that. He does need her help. Jack needs her help.

So stay away from the information part entirely.

"Doc, he's not holding up very well. As you know he's been going well out of his way to start trying to help your little girls, but now he's dealing with the consequences and. ...I'm just concerned, is all. I know you don't owe him a thing, but if you're willing to give me just a few minutes of your time, I promise I will make it up to you."

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