did_unkindly: (. this leaky fishtank)
Jack Ryan ([personal profile] did_unkindly) wrote in [community profile] weathertop 2013-03-10 03:14 pm (UTC)

Jack, below and behind him, starts to shudder and thrash in no particular direction. A last automatic reaction to realising that he's breathing water.

But soon he goes completely still. He already had a collapsing lung, so all the drowning didn't help.

You jerk.

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